Writing Lesson

Hi girls,

This week your assignment is to write 5 paragraphs on your favourite fandom/series, and it must tell me why you like it and how you came by it. It can contain as many words as your like, and is to be done on draft writing paper and published on Word. Please include your name and title of work in your Word document. All assignments should be sent to me at academyfordolls@gmail.com . Please have your assignments published and sent by December 19th, and I look forward to reading and grading your assignments!

Now, onto the class:

This week is our last week on TEEL paragraph writing. Last lesson I explained what TEEL paragraph writing is.

Today you will be taking a test that will be worth some of your grades on this subject. NO CHEATING. Please don't look at the previous lesson for the answers, as you have to take notes yourself. Link to test is here

Also girls, you don't have to have a TEEL paragraph structure in your assignment!

Grades For Writing Assignment

Hi girls! 

Today I have your results from the writing assignment, which was last weeks assignment. 

Winter

I enjoy winter time because of all of the cuddy, fashionable clothes, the warm food and drinks and the nice times you can enjoy cuddled up with the fire a light and reading a book. Here at my house it is always a really nice temperature because of our wood fire and the insulation. This means that Lucy and I can enjoy reading books, writing in our diaries, doing school work or just relaxing. 

For my other reasons, I enjoy winter because of all the beautiful fashions. I enjoy shopping with Lucy, on Etsy and American Girl. We love buying coats, scarves, gloves, vests and much, much more! I love making outfits and trying on new items. Winter is the perfect time for relaxing with a hot chocolate in front of a fire.

In conclusion, winter is the perfect time for relaxing, baking and shopping!

By Rebecca-Lou Long

Wow Rebecca! This is an amazing piece of work, and really describes why you like Winter. I love how you included bits about what you and Lucy love to do together, and the fashions that you enjoy buying! Although it was only 2 paragraphs and a conclusion sentence, I am giving you an A+ on this assignment!

Winter Wonderland

Paragraph I: Hot Chocolate

As the burning liquid slithers down my throat, it burns a chocolatey taste in me. The sensation of hot liquid rumbling around your tummy feels excellent, but mysterious. I have wondered aloud, shall I ever see the most perfect Hot Chocolate again or a 1^st and last see? I hope that one day I shall see one again!

Paragraph II: Snowflakes in America

In my old town, the snowflakes would land delicately on your nose and melt daintily. They would make you feel secure and safe, all huddled in one big lump on your head like a group of elephants! I hope that it will one day snow here in Australia so that I can be re-united again!

Paragraph III: Gingerbread Biscuits 

The smell of tender and raw ginger pronged in my nose as I walk closer to the kitchen door. My heart opens like a door left ajar as I walk inside to see a tray filled with biscuits scattered here and there!

By Kit Kittredge 

   

Wow Kit! This is really a masterpiece. I love how you described the feeling of the hot chocolate going down your throat and in your tummy, how the snowflakes feel on your nose and how the gingerbread smells when you see the gingerbread biscuits! I love how you had each paragraph one certain topic, so I am giving you an A++ on this assignment! 

By: Grace Eve Smith    Class: Y6 Academy For Dolls

Wintertime Love

I love wintertime because I can snuggle up in warm jumpers and have hot chocolate every day. Winter is perfect because you can stay in your pajamas and relax, hang out with friends and even take wonderful wintertime photos. 

Wintertime is also perfect because you can sit in a corner of your room and read books as you like. My favourite wintertime books are Narnia series, GOTY Grace books and BeForever books. 

Lastly, I love winter because it’s perfect for going skiing in the snow, or even just building a snowman or having a snowball fight. It is also great because really awesome clothes come out that make you warm and snuggly. 

Wow Grace! I love how you described how you feel during winter, and how you really like to photograph wintertime! I love how you also added a list of your favourite books, and even added things about outside! I love how you really summed up winter, so I am giving you an A+ on this assignment!  

Student of the week is… Miss Kit, For outstanding performance in this weeks assignment! 

Your First Writing Assignment

Hi girls,

This week for your assignment you have to write 3 paragraphs about things you love about Wintertime, or Winter in general. It can only contain up to 150 words or less, and is to be done on the draft writing paper and published on Word. Please include your name and title of work in your Word document. All Assignments should be send to me at academyfordolls@gmail.com . Please have your assignment published and sent by the September 5th, and I look forward to reading and grading all your assignments!

Now onto the class:

For the next 2 weeks we are going to be learning on how to write a TEEL paragraph. Confused? Let me explain it to you:

TEEL

T - Topic Sentence (What is your main point?)
E - Evidence (What is your evidence? It reinforces your idea in your topic sentence)
E - Explanation (Why is your point important?)
L - Link (How does it relate to your actual topic?)



Also girls, you don't have to have a TEEL paragraph structure in your assignment!